Comments : The Lemon Drop Kid

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Scott Cole

    Oh yes I love it great rhyme wonderful story and awesome message.....fine job my friend thanks for bringing it to my attention. If I'm able I will nominate it....

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Lucifer

      Thanks Scott for nominating it.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Em

    Another Fabulous write

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Lucifer

    Mark, so you have decided you not gonna let anyone win this week.

    Re-Mark-able!

    I wish I could nominate this poem.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Mark, a lovely story of true love by the lemon drop kid. Your rhyming is done beautifully. Not sure why the nomination tabs aren't available yet?

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a simply charming write. Well done.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    An amazing and beautiful story weaved on lemon drops. It's so unique. Even these little lemon drops, as a subject, can give life to a love that is true and enduring. It was easy to see that the girl readily accepted the treat when she was a child, but in the ending stanza she asked lemon drop kid why he always have a lemon drop handy...as if a lemon drop would help her. Clearly as we grow, we tend to lessen the value of the things that have made us happy as children.

    I am so glad this is nominated. Great work here, Mark!

    P.S. I had hepatitis before and I am forced to eat lots of lemon drops. Your write reminded me of those days. :-)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    So very clever Mark. Really! Just too sweet (pun intended)
    I love the story this told ... especially the link between the 2nd and 3rd verse ... genius!
    =^.^=

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Mark

    Thankyou all for your comments

  • 1 week ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Massive congratulations on your beautiful, romantic win Mark. So well deserved x
    =^.^=

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on your win well deserved. Milly x

  • 1 week ago

    by Michael

    Well done on your win Mark :)
    Michael

    • 1 week ago

      by Mark

      Thankyou Michael

  • 1 week ago

    by Brenda

    Mark, congratulations! Another stellar poem for the front page. This really was a sweet write.

    • 1 week ago

      by Mark

      Thankyou Brenda!

  • 1 week ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congratulations on your win, Mark!

    • 1 week ago

      by Mark

      Thankyou Mel

  • 1 week ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win mark

    • 1 week ago

      by Mark

      Thankyou

  • 1 week ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    This is excellent! Masterfully done!!

  • 5 days ago

    by Paul Hirst

    A snapshot into the history books of life and loves
    Lovely write and well worth the accolade