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Great rhyming Mandy...exposing your hearts fears and doubts mustn't have been easy. Well written!
by Mandy Earl
Thank you, Mark. You guys always being supportive and commenting makes things easier and I appreciate your comments :D
Absolutely fantastic rhyming. I have to say it again though story of my life - letting men (I use the term lightly) know the real me for them to turn out to be idiots in tinfoil haha!!
Thank you, Em! Yeah, I'm a sucker :D
Mandy, so very true. It's not easy when this happens time and time again. You did an awesome job with this, your rhymes are spot on and flows beautifully. Well done-
Thank you, Brenda! You guys are all so nice and complimentary, I really do appreciate the feedback :D
Mandy, everything about poem is good: the flow, rhyme, the emotions.
It's not easy to put together a shattered heart just to see it shatters once again.
I hope and pray you find true love soon.
And it's good to see it in the nomination list.
Thank you so much! I think this is my first nomination, wow. Yeah it takes alot to put your hand back in the fire. I appreciate the comment!
My best wishes are with you.
such a wonderful rhyming piece, full of emotion in the on-going battles of life, really well put together
Thank you, Michael :"D
by CJ Maleney
Fantastic poem, and I think many of us have been there
Thank you Craig :D
by Kitty Cat Lady
Another brilliant write Mandy, so worthy of a nomination.
Promising he's different
Soothing, "Shhh, relax."
Ooh that bit really resonated ... been there too many times.
So, so good!
Thank you! I'm sad you've been there, but I greatly appreciate your comments :D
Mandy, this is one fantastic piece and I am so gripped from start to end. Flawless rhyming too. Loved it.
Thank you! You're always so nice about my writing, I greatly appreciate it :D