Comments : Giving Up

  • 1 month ago

    by Mark

    Great rhyming Mandy...exposing your hearts fears and doubts mustn't have been easy. Well written!

    • 1 month ago

      by Mandy Earl

      Thank you, Mark. You guys always being supportive and commenting makes things easier and I appreciate your comments :D

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    Absolutely fantastic rhyming. I have to say it again though story of my life - letting men (I use the term lightly) know the real me for them to turn out to be idiots in tinfoil haha!!

    • 1 month ago

      by Mandy Earl

      Thank you, Em! Yeah, I'm a sucker :D

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Mandy, so very true. It's not easy when this happens time and time again. You did an awesome job with this, your rhymes are spot on and flows beautifully. Well done-

    • 1 month ago

      by Mandy Earl

      Thank you, Brenda! You guys are all so nice and complimentary, I really do appreciate the feedback :D

  • 1 month ago

    by Lucifer

    Mandy, everything about poem is good: the flow, rhyme, the emotions.
    It's not easy to put together a shattered heart just to see it shatters once again.
    I hope and pray you find true love soon.

    And it's good to see it in the nomination list.

    • 1 month ago

      by Mandy Earl

      Thank you so much! I think this is my first nomination, wow. Yeah it takes alot to put your hand back in the fire. I appreciate the comment!

    • 1 month ago

      by Lucifer

      My best wishes are with you.

  • 1 month ago

    by Michael

    Mandy,
    such a wonderful rhyming piece, full of emotion in the on-going battles of life, really well put together

    Well done

    Much love
    Michael :)

  • 1 month ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Fantastic poem, and I think many of us have been there

    Take care

    Craig

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Another brilliant write Mandy, so worthy of a nomination.

    Promising he's different
    Soothing, "Shhh, relax."

    Ooh that bit really resonated ... been there too many times.
    So, so good!
    =^.^=

    • 1 month ago

      by Mandy Earl

      Thank you! I'm sad you've been there, but I greatly appreciate your comments :D

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    Mandy, this is one fantastic piece and I am so gripped from start to end. Flawless rhyming too. Loved it.

    • 1 month ago

      by Mandy Earl

      Thank you! You're always so nice about my writing, I greatly appreciate it :D