Seasonal change (Sonnet)

by Michael   Sep 4, 2017


The season starts to change its sunshine rays
I hope that summer love still warms the air
As lonely hearts can break on winter days
so wrap your lovely ones with tender care
Jack Frost is soon; to open up his door
he’ll fill the air and freeze up all beneath
and try to scratch you with his icy claw;
or come and bite you with his chilly teeth.
So keep an eye out for the helpless ones;
ones are folk of frail within their home
Folk who may have baked you hot cross buns
Whom live and dwell in houses all alone
The skies are dulling out our summer night
darkness looms a seasonal change of light.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    *Slight edit to last line, as I realised the meter was slightly out*

    Thanks

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Thank you Miss Brenda,
    Absolutely right, maybe a little early with the thought. But it gets us thinking down the line :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, another sonnet? You are on fire with these, and so well done! I really liked the message you conveyed also. We have to look out for our elderly and frail, winter can be the cruelest of months.

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Another sonnet...the third I have read in a row... Wow... Really beautiful, Michael. Flowed so well. Awesome.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel lovely comments as ever, another one on the way ;)

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Dear Michael this is Absolutely beautiful. Add to my favorite. Be blessed.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Dagmar, that's a lovely compliment :)

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