Comments : The Soundtrack Of My Life

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    **A simple hefty kick to my head whilst playing with a friend, aged 11, killed nerves in my ears and left me with roughly 30% hearing. Enough to hear very bass tones. But technology has come a very long way since then and my super high tech hearing aids mean I don't miss as much as I otherwise would have. Happy days! =^.^= **

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    A true story of triumph over adversity.

    I really enjoyed this poem

    Craig

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Craig ... it's been good for me to write it :-)
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Mandy

    Wow, I love that you turned something tragic into something positive! I can read your strength in your writing and I love seeing through your perspective <3

    -Mandy

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Mandy ... it could have been so much worse! x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Kitty, you are writing very good poems one after another.
    The flow, rhyme, meaning, everything you express very well.

    Keep on fighting like this.
    Soon you will hear running water and the call of the birds too.

    I am thankful to that friend of yours who motivated you towards writing.

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw, what a lovely thing to say, thanks Lucifer x I'm very grateful to my friend too who encourages me every day, and thanks for your encouragement too :-)
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Loved this! You can take something like this and live your life feeling sorry for yourself, or you can take what was given to you head on and live your life, yes differently, but live. This write tells it so perfectly, how you see things, how you view another when you can't actually hear them. Thank you for that. We get caught up in ourselves so often, it's writes like this that remind us what's going on isn't so bad. I have twin uncles that lost their sight from too much oxegyn as babies in the incubator. They were raised to be independent adults, nothing stops them, they travel, raised families, worked, etc. I feel blessed being brought up with them being role models of a person with a "handicap"- that nothing is out of reach and you are your only limitation. Loved this!

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Brenda. I've learned that it's all relative. No matter how bad we think we have it, someone always has it worse and you can join the misery contest or you can just accept what's happened and find the positive, any positive. Not always easy and often takes time and a period of grieving, but it can be done. I've seen people overcome way worse!
      I really appreciate your comments x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Kitty... You seriously are a princess of rhymed poetry. Awww, this is touching as well as inspirational. Nominated.

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Oh Mel you sweetie! Thank you so much. I'm really touched and very proud x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Oh KitKat this is wonderful. The fourth stanza is my fav...breathtaking

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Mark ... totes appreciated x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Kitty Kat Wow! Wow!

    This is a beautiful, but so expressive from your emotional heart. So delicately powerful, that rhymes wonderfully...And good for you

    Much love

    Michael :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Hey Michael. Thank you so much ... I rarely do anything delicately, so that's an achievement in itself :-)
      Much appreciated x
      =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Hey Michael. Thank you so much ... I rarely do anything delicately, so that's an achievement in itself :-)
      Much appreciated x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Wow! Fabulous. What a positive powerful piece. Definitely deserved the nomination x

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Oh my heart.. love this !

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Congratulations!!!! So happy for you

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on a very well deserved win. Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Kitty K

    Well done on a very well deserved winning piece

    Much love

    Michael :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Michael, I'm proper chuffed! :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Congratulations!
    Kit Kat

    So hearing running water and the call of the birds now?

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Lucifer! Hahaha ... I'm a very happy Kitty :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your front page write! This was one of those writes which showed the world that no matter what we can overcome a tragedy and continue to live.

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congratulations on your win, Kitty! Yey!

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Mel ... and for your nomination ... yay! :-) xx
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Beautiful!! Congratulations on your win. Very well deserved. - Jane

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Jane, I really appreciate that :-)
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Robin Carretti

    Just so amazing I love your creative heartful writing

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Robin. Thank you for saying that :-)
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judging comment

    "The Sound Track Of My Life" By Kitty Cat Lady 4 points

    I choose this as one of my favorite 3 this week because it shows the endurance, the spirit and the will of humanity to overcome.

    What some will see as a barrier others see as a challenge to be overcome. The author quite clearly has done this and has shared the story of such. The explanation behind the poem is something of a bonus.

    The rhyming in this poem is excellent but I think the addition of a word here or there would have helped it flow a little easier, although it still works rather well.

    Thank you for giving us an insight to your world and I hope the boffins create even better devices for you.

    A very inspiring write (4)

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Ah Craig! It's great to know the name behind the judge's comment at last! Thanks so much ... it really meant a lot to me to win with this poem and I'm really grateful for your part in it :-) xx
      Kitty =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    JUDGING COMMENT:
    The Soundtrack Of My Life by Kitty Cat Lady points 7
    Usually I'm not one for long pieces because I seem to go off track when reading them but this one was just right in length especially at it kept an unforced rhyming throughout and the message that this gave out was a strong one, one that we could all take heed of because it's inspirational and though this lady has had obstacles to overcome she's done it with sheer strength. I take my hat off to you for an inspirational yet raw fluent write and wish you all the best.

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw, thank you lovely Em! Your vote on this meant a lot! Thanks so much for the lovely comments as well as your time for your judging term xx
      =^.^=