Comments : Mother in-laws Visit

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    My face is smiling as she arrives
    There's nothing for me to say
    I go and hide the kitchen knives
    Well it's only for one day

    ^^

    Brilliant, Milly. Your rhyming is smooth as water off glass in this one and the subject matter is...well, let's just say relatable somewhat!
    Hope someone nominates this. I would but am out of votes.

    take care,
    Ben

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Mandy Earl

    Haha I love it, Milly! I feel for you and I wish I could come over and find something to make her trip ov-I mean, something constructive to say. Good for you, and I'm sorry you have to deal with that but it sounds like it's worth it to you :) My heart goes out to you in your time of need :P

    -Mandy

  • 2 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hahaha...Milly! This gave me a really good laugh. The ending is so fab! And as Ben says, oh my, this is some flawless rhyming too.

    Awww, I am out of nominations as well!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    OMG! This is so absolutely TRUE! I'm proper giggling over here at the knives bit :-)
    I still can't nominate but I'm adding it my faves and will use it as a reminder in years to come to not be the MIL from hell! x
    =^.^=

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Em

    This did make me laugh Milly :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Miss Milly, as you say its only for a day. I love your truth in poetry, so delicately raw.. but packs a punch

    Much love

    Michael xx

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Love this Milly! Dealing with ones mother in law can be trying. I love how you put the knives away. You are right, it's only for one day. Hugs-

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Mark

    Hey Milly! You captured the moments leading towards the visit really well!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Very well done Milly, and how true, I think of a song from many years ago called; "Mother-in-law"
    Very funny and cute rhyming, I nominated, I think it's a Win!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    It's okay, she's not his real mom.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    We all know and have experienced the visit with "mama dearest". Your sense of humor I love it. Be blessed

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Lucifer

    It's never easy to please our mother in law.
    Well penned, Milly.

    Good to see this poem in the nomination list.

  • 1 week ago

    by Elittos Ocinemod

    Great and humorous poem. Clever!

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Thankyou so much everyone for all your lovely comments and likes. It really means so much to me that it made people laugh and smile - more than you know x

  • 1 week ago

    by Mark

    Congratulations Milly!!

  • 1 week ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Huge congratulations on your well deserved win Milly. This is just so relatable x
    =^.^=

  • 1 week ago

    by Michael

    Well done Miss Milly on front page news. Really pleased for you :)

    With love

    Michael x

  • 1 week ago

    by Lucifer

    I think your mother in law will be pleased now.

    Congratulations Milly!

  • 1 week ago

    by Brenda

    Milly, congratulations on your front page write! Lovely to see yours up there! It was a unique poem that so many of us could identify with.

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I'm really over the moon with the results. I would never have guessed it would turn out to be so popular. Huge thanks to everyone for all the votes, comments, likes and support. I feel like I've just woken up on Christmas morning and got the best present ever xx