Comments : Two Faces

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, I totally felt this one. Oh, the ending stanza speaks volumes. It's a wonder why sometimes even the most perfect couple end up in separate ways.

    Just my thoughts, I think I will like it more if you started with third person from the beginning stanza.

    • 1 month ago

      by Domenico Sottile

      Thank you>. The "two faces" is the perspective from their children. E. O.

    • 1 month ago

      by mossgirl19

      Ohh, okay. Now it's clear. :-)

  • 1 month ago

    by Milly Hayward

    At first read I found it a little confusing probably because my imagination went off on a tangeant lol. On reading it again I realised it wasnt siamese twins that had been operated on but a couple whos love had changed. The last stanza made it all clear. How sad that two people who loved so much end up almost prisoners who wear two faces. An interesting piece. Milly x

    • 1 month ago

      by Domenico Sottile

      Thank you. The "two faces" is the perspective from their children. E. O.