Comments : By The Sea

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is just lovely! I too take great solace in the water. It calms me....well done -

  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    I am a big fan of beaches.
    I know the tranquility one feels sitting near the ocean.
    It soothes our heart and mind.
    Each wave reminds us that there is always something good keep on coming into our life.

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hello, Sir...this is beautiful! A calming read.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    This is so beautiful my only suggestion would be to centre the piece but that's only my opinion

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    By The Sea by Elittos Ocinemod points 7
    This piece had a somewhat calming feel to it that made me feel like I was on a beach dipping my toes in to the ocean or paddling along in there with the sun on my face and all my worries being washed away.
    I do feel the ocean is a really strong metaphor for something that is beautiful and soul warning yet soul destroying all the same. To be one with the ocean and let it cleanse all the bad away would be fantastic.