Comments : Spirits In The Wind

  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    This made me overcome with so much emotion! I'll come back and comment properly later

  • 3 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Mark the winds must always be free from you! A beautiful piece that resonates deeply for those I have lost this way x
    =^.^=

  • 3 months ago

    by Mini

    Beautiful! :)

  • 3 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Mark as far as I know the moment we die we do not remember anything.
    All the earthly things or connections just left here, whether it's billions of dollars or tons of emotions.

    But, as long as I am alive your poetry is something I won't be able to forget.

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautifully put, Mark. I feel the same way! I hope people will not lose hope and find reasons to live...it's really difficult to die! Beautiful language here and touching message. Great piece.

  • 3 months ago

    by Mandy Earl

    This was a hard read for me, I had alot of suicide in my teenage years around me. This is beautifully written and made me cry. <3

    -Mandy

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    Mark,
    Such a powerful and really interesting right about 'the deed' it's a very grey subject and you have penned your piece delicately, but with emotion
    Well done
    Michael :)

  • 3 months ago

    by Mark

    Thankyou for reading this piece poets. This one is for you Kenny - I know your reading this somehow!

  • 3 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Dips ones head

    Fantastic words mark

    Craig

  • 3 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Mark - excellent piece.. I saw this was for someone obviously close to you.. I know they are out there reading it! Well done!

  • 3 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Beautiful

  • 2 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    So very beautiful. Take care

  • 2 months ago

    by Love

    Absolutely breathtaking. I shall cherish these words and hold them close to my heart. You have a beautiful soul! <3