Comments : Grave of a Stillborn Soul

  • 6 years ago

    by gumshuda

    I, really really like it. Uh, you're getting the hang of it again. Congratulations.

    • 6 years ago

      by John Doe

      Thank you so much for taking the time to read it!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Powerful!

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ouch! I can feel that pain! This is beautiful and haunting.
    Excellently written x
    =^ ^=

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Mihir...this gave me the creeps...a woman empty eyed with a hollowed soul...cursing in that time you greatly described...what a powerful representation of how pain affects a person...your visuals here are excellent! Add to that your polished rhythm and rhyme! I am more than glad this is nominated. Great write!

    • 6 years ago

      by John Doe

      Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

  • 6 years ago

    by Shhrruti Jain

    Omg! Amazingly written!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Hauntingly beautiful Mihir Oh my goodness!!

    • 6 years ago

      by John Doe

      Thank you Em!! Your kind words are always cherished!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Abhay Agarwal

    Amazing!!

    • 6 years ago

      by John Doe

      Thank you so much Abhay!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Congratulations on your win mihir :)

    Michael

    • 6 years ago

      by John Doe

      Thank you so much Michael!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Congratulations mihir!

    L*****r

    • 6 years ago

      by John Doe

      Thank you so much Lucifer!!

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congratulations, Mihir!

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Mihir, congratulations on.your win! This write really is stellar. So well done-

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Congratulations Mihir :-)
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Congratulations Mihir!

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Can I just say wow

    Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win!

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congrats on your win Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congrats on your win Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by RustySoul

    Such a heartfelt piece..!! Congratulations on the win.

  • 6 years ago

    by Paul Hirst

    So sad so well rhymed and written well deserved accolade

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congratulation on your win