Comments : September Night

  • 9 months ago

    by Paul Hirst

    My feelings exactly encompassing this poem at the changing seasons
    Great Write Mate

  • 9 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautiful visuals. Loved it.

  • 9 months ago

    by BlueJay

    I love poems about the seasons blending into one another because this is what got me started in poetry lol, so this definitely has a spot in my heart without even reading it all the way through. And once I finished reading the piece, I fell even more in love with it, because other than the every line starting with a captial letter thing, this was incredibly well penned and because of its short nature, the lack of stanzas worked incredibly well. The images not only created a scene, but they also helped bring your voice into the piece, and I enjoy how clearly and seamlessly this happened.

    Excellent write. I'm glad I stumbled across this.