Ambivalence

by Everlasting   Sep 16, 2017


Short of hopes, a log swims;
Afloat -
Down towards a riverbank.

Just in time - a lumberjack,
Out, cutting trees,
Yells, "there you are!".

Written by Lucero L. (L.L.)

For Hellons contest - choose an emotion
Sept 16, 2017

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  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    The poetic beauty of this one is a stand out.

  • 6 years ago

    by Aegis

    This was lovely and just inspired me to post my newest piece. So well done and thank you:)

    • 6 years ago

      by Everlasting

      I'm glad it inspired you. Thank you for reading and commenting.

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Took me several reads to realize just his poetic this is. Well done

    • 6 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thanks Mark.
      Sorry, my writes for the most part may require some thinking to get them. It's probably my fault for not explaining them or leaving some note to make it easier for the reader. This one is an acrostic, the first half is SAD (the emotion of the tree, the second one is Joy.( the emotion of the lumberjack). The title would be how I feel. :/

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