Comments : Metal Fatigue

  • 2 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is so clever ... and sad Paul. Yes wouldn't it be great if we could switch off certain emotions sometimes. x
    =^.^=

  • 2 months ago

    by Mark

    I can relate to this; wishing to not feeling anything....well written

  • 2 months ago

    by Justen Smith

    This really spoke to me thank you.

    Did you mean quite or quiet, I wasn't sure if I had missed the meaning or if it was a type.

    Thank you again.

    • 2 months ago

      by Paul Hirst

      Thank You I did mean quiet

  • 2 months ago

    by Mandy Earl

    Wow, I wish I could be a robot alot in life, I have definitely thought this way before. I love it, clever but very sad.

    -Mandy

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, you definitely nailed it Paul. This is super relatable and is wonderfully rhymed. Great title too. Added to faves and nominated.

    • 2 months ago

      by Paul Hirst

      Thank You MG that's very kind

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    A great piece engineered from a robot perspective
    well done Paul

    Michael :)

    • 2 months ago

      by Paul Hirst

      Engineered from a robots perspective is a great compliment Thank You Michael

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    A short but extremely powerful piece that we can all relate to in some way - I for one would love to be numb to any feeling after yet another heartbreak lol but then again we'd be numb to all emotion so Que Sera Sera and all that

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Glad to see this nominated. An interesting perspective. Well done-

    • 2 months ago

      by Paul Hirst

      Thank You Brenda very kind