Comments : The Apple Tree

  • 1 month ago

    by Maple Tree

    I've been struck by an apple! Nominated

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    The ending was unexpected! Haha. I imagine you are on your knees promising her forever and she is standing, quite blushing while looking at you, then struck by an apple. Enjoyed it very much. Glad it's nominated, Ben.

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Ben, what a twist at the end! Love this...

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    This is astounding Ben as always. It moved me in that you were laying your ass on the line then I just laughed at the end because the apple just killed the moment - I could just picture the unfortunate case of events going down paparazzi at the ready for you've been framed lol

    • 1 month ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Glad you liked it, Em. Comedy isn't my usual thing, lol

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ben this just rolls off the tongue effortlessly. It's clever and paints such a picture and the ending is genius! Loved it! :-)
    =^.^=

  • 1 month ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I love it and it made me smile. Take care

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Mini

    Loved this

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Sherry Caayupan

    Nice poem...I loved this one! :)