Comments : Bear the Full Weight of This, Love:

  • 2 months ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Sad, but Beautiful write.

  • 2 months ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Lovely write simply sent a shiver up my spine
    Great

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    This is extremely sad but something about it is so beautiful too. Its like you don't say so much in these lines but you say enough, if that makes much sense.

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is so sad to read Maddie. I feel some heavy weight after reading this. But as Em said, there is something beautiful about the sadness in here.

  • 2 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Think I've been in a similar position but I shall not write another word for or about that person.

    Thank you for sharing this

    Craig

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Bluejay

    This piece flows with delicacy, although full of sadness,
    but a lovely poem to read
    much love
    Michael :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful piece steeped in sadness a well deserved nomination. Milly x

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    JUDGING COMMENT:
    Bear the Full Weight of This, Love: by BlueJay points 4
    Blue as a real way with words that always tells this hidden story where you have to read between the lines for a better interpretation and this is no exception and it's one of the reasons I like this so much it oozes nostalgia and longing.