Numb

by DeviousCharmer   Sep 19, 2017


Tired of the same game
Want a new character to play

Struggling to live in the moment
Constantly looking for something different

Wanting to break free
Holding back

No where to go
Everywhere is the same

Craving to feel new things
Instead i get the same stings

Wasting time
Feeling meaningless

Losing my focus
Forgetting my motivation

Falling asleep
Need something to wake me up

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  • 4 weeks ago

    by Milly Hayward

    You have certainly captured the confusion of the mind and the formating definitely works well. Good rhyming too. Milly x

  • 4 weeks ago

    by The Lone Ranger

    i like the format on this piece. the separation really allows for easier absorption of the work.

    life is hard. we often find ways to escape from what is hard; sometimes a brief interlude, whilst at other times we consider other, more extreme measures.

    all the best, you have a gift.

    LR

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Nicholash2003

      I would agree with "The Lone Ranger" on this one I loved the way you separated the stanzas, it made a huge impact on the way I perceived it. Stanza number five was well written and I loved the poem itself it was very meaningful. I remember when I was going through depression and I felt the same way.

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    We all seem to be searching for something. You really expressed this well in this write. Nicely rhymed through-out.

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