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  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    We all seem to be searching for something. You really expressed this well in this write. Nicely rhymed through-out.

  • 2 months ago

    by The Lone Ranger

    i like the format on this piece. the separation really allows for easier absorption of the work.

    life is hard. we often find ways to escape from what is hard; sometimes a brief interlude, whilst at other times we consider other, more extreme measures.

    all the best, you have a gift.

    LR

    • 2 months ago

      by Nicholash2003

      I would agree with "The Lone Ranger" on this one I loved the way you separated the stanzas, it made a huge impact on the way I perceived it. Stanza number five was well written and I loved the poem itself it was very meaningful. I remember when I was going through depression and I felt the same way.

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    You have certainly captured the confusion of the mind and the formating definitely works well. Good rhyming too. Milly x