Comments : My black pen

  • 1 month ago

    by Mark

    Wow...captured the moments so descriptively...the rhyming seems effortless carrying the black ink theme all through. This is what I wish I could write.

    • 1 month ago

      by Loaf

      Thank you I’m glad you enjoyed

    • 1 month ago

      by Loaf

      Thank you I’m glad you enjoyed

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    I liked this a lot. It flowed nicely, rhyming sprinkled in. I like the concept of writing on ones skin and every day its washed away to start anew. Well done- and welcome to P& Q!

    • 1 month ago

      by Loaf

      Thank you so much