Comments : I don't know why...

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well rhymed, Mahesh, but certainly a sad piece to read.

    Take care,
    Ben

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    A sad story which is relatable to make you brought to life with your rhymes well done

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Anamika Patil

    Great poem mahesh. People are cunnig so much. TC