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Oh wow!! This is exciting and the speed of the rhythm is like a tango lol this is either a sensual piece or I'm just extremely ahem mind in gutter type of person if you get me
by Kitty Cat Lady
I get you Em ... with you all the way ;-) lol
Thank you x
Just becoming a master of rhyme aren't you!! To convey such connection and mood is such a talent!
Aw thanks Mark :-) I'm so glad you liked it :-) x
Miss Kitty K
This is a brilliant piece of rhyming, about a fight or a dance! Such a lovely flowing piece, which leaves the end with such intrigue.
Really enjoyed reading this
Thanks Michael I really appreciate that. :-)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it x
by - Mr. Darcy
Super write. The verses are tighter, resulting in a better flow.
A fight holds many similarities to a dance. I like the intrigue that the reader is left with.
Why thank you Mr Darcy, I appreciate your comments ...
and I'm watching Strictly Come Dancing ... lol x
by Ben Pickard
This is excellent, Kitty and as Michael says, the verses are tight which lends an excellent rhythm to the poem and the rhymes are fluid because of that.
Thanks so much Ben, so glad you liked it :-) x
Kitty... What an exciting piece. Wonderful job!
Aw thanks Mel :-) x
by Dagmar Wilson
What a nice and beautiful flow sure feels like a tango. Take care
Thank you Dagmar :-) x
by Sinners gospel
I guess this is Tango
Thanks Shane :-) x
by CJ Maleney
This is such an amazing write, not everyone's kinda thing but it's deffo my kinda thing.
May your fire continue to burn
Only just seen this, I hope it gets picked up for the weekly contest
Aw thanks Craig, I'm so glad it's your 'kinda thing' ;-) lol x
Kitty - A) i hope you dont mind me call you kitty.
b) excellent write!! Loved it from begining to end. Loved the rhyming and the layout
Hello fellow crazy cat lady! Of course you can call me Kitty :-)
Thanks for your lovely comments :-) x
Edit: you nominated it! Aw thank you sooo much .. how lovely! xx
by Robin Carretti
JUST Quite divine lovely your writing hits my heart.
I really appreciate that Robin x