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Beautifully written :(
Thank you Mark :)
by Dagmar Wilson
This is very touching. Paying your last respekt and saying your good-Bye. I have not been to many funerals it is final. There is no coming back. All the very best
Thank you Dagmar :)
Very well said Michael and a lovely structure... It's a heart isn't it? Very unique.
Thank you Miss M
Yes a sort of heart shape..:)
by Kitty Cat Lady
Beautiful and heart shaped! x
Thank you Miss Kitty K x
by Sinners gospel
Beautifully written and the heart structure just loved it.
Thank you Free Verse :)
Double post Can't get this piece of art out of my mind. Brilliant
Thanks Mark, probably the best compliment one can receive :)
Very strategically and beatifully written. Nothing short of a great write. 5/5
Thank you CJT :)
Really captures the heaviness of death. I like the kenning of 'love-loss'- a perceptive depiction of grief.
Thank you Alice for reading and commenting :)x
by Gwenyth Hill
This poem is so amazing and truly describes what a farewell is like. Great poem!