Comments : Farewell

  • 2 months ago

    by Mark

    Beautifully written :(

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Thank you Mark :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is very touching. Paying your last respekt and saying your good-Bye. I have not been to many funerals it is final. There is no coming back. All the very best

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Dagmar :)

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Very well said Michael and a lovely structure... It's a heart isn't it? Very unique.

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss M
      Yes a sort of heart shape..:)

  • 2 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Beautiful and heart shaped! x
    =^.^=

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K x

  • 2 months ago

    by S s...

    Beautifully written and the heart structure just loved it.

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Free Verse :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Mark

    Double post Can't get this piece of art out of my mind. Brilliant

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Mark, probably the best compliment one can receive :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Loco4Loco

    Very strategically and beatifully written. Nothing short of a great write. 5/5

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you CJT :)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Alice

    Really captures the heaviness of death. I like the kenning of 'love-loss'- a perceptive depiction of grief.

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Alice for reading and commenting :)x