Comments : Broken record

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ouch! Despite the subject I love this Shane ... I can feel the bitterness. Great write :-) x

  • 3 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    I love the grit in here.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Free verse

    Another lovely piece of writing from you

    Michael :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Mark

    Powerful write free verse. 'Tasted lies in your lipstick' .