Comments : Empty Vessel

  • 3 weeks ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Oh my how do I like this.

    It's sad though. I guess a lot of the things we write are.

    But still.

    Is it not sad that the poems we love so much are so filled with sadness.

    Craig

    Ps it's in my faves

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you :)
      I believe we are told to forget our negative emotions; we often teach our children to.
      But what beautiful emotions they are.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    So beautifully written Risqué... beautifully heartbreaking as I term it. A great first post... warmest welcome to the site.

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you for your kind words, I'm sure I will enjoy my time here.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Free verse


    I have not created this emptiness
    Tidal waves of broken promises and second chances
    Have made the smooth stones of my heart into jagged rocks...

    Every word is true, true, true.

    • 1 week ago

      by Risqué

      thank you for reading, I'm glad I was able to relate with you.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Michael

    A beautifully written piece Risqué,

    I pleased its nominated

    Much love
    Michael:)

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Risqué

      Sorry, I'm new, how do you know that something is nominated? And what exactly is it nominated for?
      Thank you for your kind words.

      Risqué

  • 5 days ago

    by Ben Pickard

    You really do have a very natural and gifted way with words. You are also a very welcome addition to the site.

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 5 days ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you Ben,

      It means a lot coming from a seasoned member.

  • 5 days ago

    by Brenda

    This was so sad but truly beautiful. Your words wove such a melancholy story. So well done -