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Just lovely Michael....this is so soft and sweet...one thing, in your title, is it suppose to be Music?
Thank you Miss Brenda
for lovely comments..
and yes 'muic' wasn't music to my ears haha.. thanks for that little 'typo gremlin'
I have no words Michael for how beautiful this is. Added to favs
Thanks Mark that's a really nice compliment :)
by Milly Hayward
Beautifully written. You have equisitly captured the gentle melody and transferred it onto the page. Loved it. Milly x
Such lovely words as ever thank you :)
Thank you Miss Mel x
by Kitty Cat Lady
Michael, only you could use 'schmoozes' and 'shoos' in a poem and make it sound so beautiful!
Is the 'nape of a maple heart' a cello? Violin? Sorry if it's obvious ... d'oh! Lol x
Thank you Miss Kitty K
That's lovely words and yes it's a violin :)x
It's like you made an incomplete thing completed with such lovely words. S s..
Nice words free verse thank you :)
by Dagmar Wilson
So glad to see it got nominated.You sure have a way with words that can make a heart melt. All the best
Ah Dagmar thank you for your lovely words :)
by - Mr. Darcy
I think I love you! :0)
You've made me blush in a peculiar man way haha..
Anyway thank you for your compliment :)
by Robin Carretti
I love this I can relate since I am a singer love this it was melody blown me away.