Comments : I Will Eat You If You Fall (Spider)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, absolutely love this! It's gory and gruesome and just fabulous! Lol.

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks, Brenda. I don't know what came over me...

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    This is really creative and I'm not sure what I expected when the title caught my attention. It kept my attention up until the very last line.
    Well done

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Love it! Is it a cat? It made me chuckle :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      K, no I actually had a vision of me waiting manically beneath a spider web, mouth ajar but I can see a cat would be more...understandable, lol

  • 3 weeks ago

    by carl

    my type of poem , dark and funny at the same time .

  • 3 weeks ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Bloody cat people lol.

    Brilliant though dude

    Craig

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Oi! Craig .... tut... 'cat' people rock! Lol ... Sorry my mind didn't twist enough to imagine Ben picking off the spider legs! Bad, twisty Ben! ;-)
      =^.^=

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Lol, Thanks Craig

  • 3 weeks ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Craig

    Im a cat person :(

    Also Benny - i liked this.. beautifully written. Well done

  • 3 weeks ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Ben, my good man. This is going straight in my favourites. You have outdone yourself here. Great imagery, dark and horrific. Stephen King would quiver at this. The meter, as is now expected from you is exquisite - Like a twisted lullaby. Go on, try and sleep now little children! *laughs manically!*

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I am so tickled by this this is a winner. Ben wow. Add to my favorite. Bless you my friend

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this seemingly effortless Halloween/ spider poem. It brought a smile to my face. Definitely another favourite for me. A very well deserved nomination. Milly x

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Free verse

    The spider won't fall.
    Very well woven
    Ben