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by Ben Pickard
As ever, Michael, a real pleasure to work with you. All the best.
by Dagmar Wilson
My two favorite guys it was a pleasure reading. All the very best.
by Kitty Cat Lady
Aw, you guys! ;-)
This is beautiful, a lovely reminder that summer will come around again and a brilliant collaboration of two of my faves
Fave line: "And flowers dance their hues from budding hips" ... poetry personified!
Well done fellas ... one is muchly impressed x
Thank you, Kitty. You have Michael to thank for that line.
Really beautiful descriptions....'solar king' one of them! Great Collab
Thank you all for your lovely comments and wonderful compliments.
A pleasure working with Ben, and the beauty is not knowing what either will write. Its a lovely way for a collaboration, and I hope a few more to come :
Thank you Ben for posting and really enjoyed this once again :)
A few more to come indeed, Michael.
Nice job guy. The message and the strong ending reminds me of Walt Whitman:
“Nothing is ever lost nor can be lost;
the body aged, sluggish,cold….
the embers left from earlier fires shall dully flame again”
Michael and Ben, wow oh wow! What a beautifully written sonnet you guys! It's so seamless, you two really rocked this. So well done-
by Free verse
There is a warming feel upon this wold;
For now we’ll soak up love beneath the sun.
Below the grass that seems beset with frost,
The flowers stir and nothing's ever lost.
Something like this happens when two genius decides to come together.
Favorited.. amazing guys
by - Mr. Darcy
Well done guys. Sonnets are difficult at the best of times. Here you have penned a piece to be proud of.
Gents this is beautiful and I'm truly pleased it's been nominated I have nothing else to say apart from going to read it again
Again thank you to everyone's lovely and inspiring comments.
Thank you Dagmar for nominating Ben and myself
by Milly Hayward
A wonderful joint effort resulting in a masterpiece. Love it. Milly x
Amazing write you two! Love button to the max (<3)!!
Thank you Ren and Milly :)x
Absolutely adore this.
Thank you, everyone.