Comments : Sonnet For Summer (Collab with Michael)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    As ever, Michael, a real pleasure to work with you. All the best.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    My two favorite guys it was a pleasure reading. All the very best.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw, you guys! ;-)
    This is beautiful, a lovely reminder that summer will come around again and a brilliant collaboration of two of my faves

    Fave line: "And flowers dance their hues from budding hips" ... poetry personified!

    Well done fellas ... one is muchly impressed x
    =^.^=

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Kitty. You have Michael to thank for that line.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Mark

    Really beautiful descriptions....'solar king' one of them! Great Collab

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Thank you all for your lovely comments and wonderful compliments.

    A pleasure working with Ben, and the beauty is not knowing what either will write. Its a lovely way for a collaboration, and I hope a few more to come :

    Thank you Ben for posting and really enjoyed this once again :)

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      A few more to come indeed, Michael.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by ddavidd

    Nice job guy. The message and the strong ending reminds me of Walt Whitman:
    “Nothing is ever lost nor can be lost;
    the body aged, sluggish,cold….
    the embers left from earlier fires shall dully flame again”

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Michael and Ben, wow oh wow! What a beautifully written sonnet you guys! It's so seamless, you two really rocked this. So well done-

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Free verse

    There is a warming feel upon this wold;
    For now we’ll soak up love beneath the sun.
    Below the grass that seems beset with frost,
    The flowers stir and nothing's ever lost.

    Something like this happens when two genius decides to come together.

    Masterpiece.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Favorited.. amazing guys

  • 2 weeks ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Well done guys. Sonnets are difficult at the best of times. Here you have penned a piece to be proud of.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Em

    Gents this is beautiful and I'm truly pleased it's been nominated I have nothing else to say apart from going to read it again

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Again thank you to everyone's lovely and inspiring comments.

    Thank you Dagmar for nominating Ben and myself

    Much love

    Michael :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A wonderful joint effort resulting in a masterpiece. Love it. Milly x

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Ren

    Amazing write you two! Love button to the max (<3)!!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Thank you Ren and Milly :)x

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Risqué

    Absolutely adore this.