Comments : Oscillation

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Frank, a delightfully visual write. Almost dreamlike - well done-

  • 2 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Truly enjoyed reading. All the best.

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Frank, I find this very passionate and as Brenda puts it out...almost dreamlike. I really love this.

  • 2 months ago

    by Sherry Caayupan

    Hi...I like this deep... ;)

  • 2 months ago

    by S s...

    See, David this is what I was talking about.
    Won't you call it a masterpiece?
    Well, for me it is.

  • 2 months ago

    by Gwenyth Hill

    Beautifully written! I agree that this poem has that dreamlike quality. Great read!

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Alice

    Wow, so dreamlike. I love the swan metaphor, its so pure. This poem reminds me of when I was a little kid and I had time to spend my life imagining myself in all my favourite books, but now I have exams and need to go and attempt to stuff all 10 of my GCSEs in my brain for my mocks in two weeks time... The joys of secondary school...