Comments : A Convenant (Hades)

  • 2 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Love this Mark! Engaging and menacing. I love your otherworldly charm :-) great write x
    =^.^=

  • 2 months ago

    by Brise

    Its beautiful and dark. I'm mesmerized by your words. I love your poetry. Keep writing :)

  • 2 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Mark
    How very well Dark (without meaning to rhyme)!
    I enjoyed this.. there is a certain thing to your poetry that draws me in...
    Well done.. Nominated.

  • 2 months ago

    by Mini

    Beautiful! :)

  • 2 months ago

    by S s...

    Hades oh ruler of my destined place and doom
    I offer this bargain - that I again may bloom.

    It's brilliant Mark.
    Is it nominated?

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Wow! Mark what a wonderful piece of writing
    Well done fella
    Michael :)

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow... Such desire to be happy... Wonderfully expressed. Great presentation here, Mark... It's very effective. Lovely tone, great rhyming too. Great work.

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    My goodness... The third stanza is the most tight one here. All this is beautifully emotionally