I miss you my love

by Everlasting   Oct 4, 2017



I miss you my love
I miss you so much

You are water of life
an ocean of salt
a river so sweet
and rarely a pond

But when you are not here
I am a desert that thirst
for your presence that is

And thus I ask
for the clouds to cry
and may be perhaps
to bring you

by my side

October 3, 2017

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  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Beautiful - nominated

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Wow, beautiful.
    So much in fewer words.
    Loved it
    Please write few more poems like this one.
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    • 6 years ago

      by Everlasting

      I can’t promise to write more like this one but will continue writing. Thank you for reading

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow... So beautifully crafted Everlasting. I felt your sentiment very well. I wish I can still nominate this.

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    I felt your longing in this well crafted piece.

  • 6 years ago

    by CânnâBîsh

    There is not one thing I didn't like about this.. Very well written. 5/5

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