Comments : Love

  • 1 year ago

    by Mark

    Absolutely beautiful Free Verse. Alike your winning last piece - I had to read this over and over. I hope it gets nominated!

    • 1 year ago

      by Ya----Na

      Thank you so much for this appreciation, Mark.

  • 1 year ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    "The more she entertained you,
    the more you tried to cage her;
    You have never seen her worth
    and
    now when I look into your eyes,
    I can't find her.''

    That verse says so much..<3 I rate a 5/5

    • 1 year ago

      by Ya----Na

      Thank you so much C J t

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Shane this is outstanding and I'm hoping it gets nominated. Once she escapes from the cage she'll never go back to him ... just brilliant! x
    =^.^=

    Ps.
    This really reminds me of a song by Keith Urban called " Stupid Boy" ... link here in case you want a listen. https://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/keithurban/stupidboy.html

    • 1 year ago

      by Ya----Na

      Thank you, lady Kitty.
      Right now listening to the song stupid boy

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Free verse

    This is a beautifully written piece with wonderful imagery throughout, I really enjoyed reading the gentle flow and theme, and definitely worthy of my nomination :)
    Well done
    Michael :)

    • 1 year ago

      by Ya----Na

      Michael, you made my day.
      Nomination from someone as inspirational as you is more than a reward.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Shane, lovely write. Such a true tale, you have to give another a space to thrive and grow and in that they will love also.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ya----Na

      Thank you so much, Brenda

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    Happy this was nominated, beautiful

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Shane... Really wonderfully written. Well fone.

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful piece. Very well written definitely going onto my favourites. Milly x

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Beautiful. Glad its nominated

    • 1 year ago

      by Ya----Na

      Thanks once again, DD..