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Absolutely beautiful Free Verse. Alike your winning last piece - I had to read this over and over. I hope it gets nominated!
by Sinners gospel
Thank you so much for this appreciation, Mark.
"The more she entertained you,
the more you tried to cage her;
You have never seen her worth
now when I look into your eyes,
I can't find her.''
That verse says so much..<3 I rate a 5/5
Thank you so much C J t
by Kitty Cat Lady
Shane this is outstanding and I'm hoping it gets nominated. Once she escapes from the cage she'll never go back to him ... just brilliant! x
This really reminds me of a song by Keith Urban called " Stupid Boy" ... link here in case you want a listen. https://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/keithurban/stupidboy.html
Thank you, lady Kitty.
Right now listening to the song stupid boy
This is a beautifully written piece with wonderful imagery throughout, I really enjoyed reading the gentle flow and theme, and definitely worthy of my nomination :)
Michael, you made my day.
Nomination from someone as inspirational as you is more than a reward.
Shane, lovely write. Such a true tale, you have to give another a space to thrive and grow and in that they will love also.
Thank you so much, Brenda
by Maple Tree
Happy this was nominated, beautiful
Shane... Really wonderfully written. Well fone.
Thank you, lady Mel
by Milly Hayward
Beautiful piece. Very well written definitely going onto my favourites. Milly x
Thank you, Milly.
Beautiful. Glad its nominated
Thanks once again, DD..