Comments : Day dreaming

  • 2 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Michael!

    "warmth
    upon my skin; poured
    from a yellow ochre well, that tilts
    from a prodigious; blue ruffle "

    I want to be in this place ... AND ... I want to get inside your head and have a jolly good rummage! I don't really have words for your amazing descriptions. I'm crossing my fingers that this receives the nomination it deserves. Just brilliant! X
    =^.^=

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K
      Your words are so lovely and inspiring :)x

  • 2 months ago

    by ddavidd

    Everything you write Michael reveals such a tender soul!!

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you for a nice compliment :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Donbukana

    This is a beautiful poem, Michael, which I will be saving to my favorites. High 5...

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you for reading and your comments :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Hellon

    This is the type of day dream that I'd love to stay in for a very long time. Your imagery is just fantastic and the words paint such a beautiful picture for the reader. Nicely done!

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Hellon for lovely comments x

  • 2 months ago

    by Mark

    The description, structure and imagery are amazing. The overall feel to this is so relaxed and the daydream is wondrous.

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 2 months ago

    by S s...


    ..I am taken unto..

    ..an aquatic ether;
    a pearlescent secrecy;
    where my eyes
    bathe in
    turquoise.

    Beautiful, Michael.
    It's heavenly experience.

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you free verse :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    "Where my eyes bathe in turquoise" I love this parte. Turquoise is my favorite color and I like what it represents. I was well drawn by this and so soothing. Thank you for sharing. All the best Michael. Add to my favorite

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar and yes turquoise represents such beauty and tranquillity x

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, Michael... What a relaxing and invigorating write. I hope this grace the front page.. This is so beautifully done.

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel,
      Lovely comments as ever :)x

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful emotional piece. Everything about it is wonderful. Loved it Milly x

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Miss Milly, I love your comments :)x

  • 2 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Michael
    Excellent piece.
    Well penned.
    Loving this layout
    Reads well.
    Fantastically vivid content.

    All ticks from me.. well done

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Nams all your ticks mean a lot :)x