Comments : Light of dawn

  • 9 months ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    Gorgeous wording. Wanted to keep reading. Lol Rated 5/5

    • 9 months ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, I feel it may not be finished so I may add more or a second part to complete it.

  • 9 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    sounds like someone is awake watching a scene of wonder. Beautiful imagery, Kasie.

    • 9 months ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, your contest helped me to write about things other than depression.

  • 9 months ago

    by Em

    Fantastic imagery here kasie

    • 9 months ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 9 months ago

    by (we & why)

    Very beautiful. Kasie
    I am a big fan of nature.
    Favorites.

    • 9 months ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, I am as well.