Comments : If i were a builder..

  • 2 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Wow Michael this is the truth so well spoken I so agree. To me the world has not changed it is the people making it rather uncomfortable to the point do our children have a future and if yes how would the future look like. There only one race and that is the human race. Why can't we just get along.? We are killing7 eachother and for what. I could go on but I may get carried away. Take care and be blessed.

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Dagmar
      What can we eh..?
      Its nice to feel what could be, and if that is all we have then so be it :)x

  • 2 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Michael - another excellent piece

  • 2 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw Michael this is lovely. If I were to elaborate it would sound very similar to Dagmar's comment, so I'll just say "what she said!" ;-)
    X
    =^.^=

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K

      what was it Dagmar said again ;)x

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow... So so wonderfully written Michael. You have a good heart, as shown by this piece here.

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel, that is a really nice thing to say, from your heart :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Purvi Gadia

    Nominated. That's all I can describe it with

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Purvi,
      I'm pleased you enjoyed reading :) and for your nomination

  • 2 months ago

    by S s...

    Michael, this is one of the best poem read so far.
    Write few more poems like this.
    Favorites.
    And Michael you really are a genius.

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      That's a really nice compliment. Thank you FVerse :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Mark

    I really like the metaphor and how thoroughly you explored it....connecting construction terms to areas of life such as religion and poverty. From your poems and posts it is very clear you have a big heart Michael. Great write!

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Lovely comments and compliments Mark :)

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank Em
      Yes if only :)x

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark, nice words :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    Absolutely love this Michael it's one of yours that stood out for me. If only it was so simple to be the type of builder you wish to be

    Take care
    Em xx

    Edit: is each meant to be together or is the h separate for affect?

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Lovely sentiment Michael. This write is so you-I love your sweet soul!

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Mark

    Congratulations Michael! So happy for you

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 2 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Congratulations, Michael. If only, eh?

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      If only Mr D yes and thank you :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Congratulations Michael! I'm so glad this was one of the winners x
    =^.^=

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats on your win, Michael! :-)

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel :)

  • 2 months ago

    by S s...

    Congratulations , Michael.
    Well deserved

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you free verse :0

  • 2 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats Michael!!! :)

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you nams x :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Justen Smith

    Congrats. I really liked the metaphor of it.

    A well deserved win. :-)

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Justen :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Well done on the win with this excellent piece. What an imaginative approach. A truly beautiful write. If only we could live in a world like this. Milly x

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by Loco4Loco

    This peice is nothing but greatness! Makes you think a little & wonder what life would be like if we all thought this way. This beauty is going to my favorites! (:

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Lovely comments CJT Thank you x

  • 1 month ago

    by Kireasha L

    All I can say is wow! Excellent piece, congrats on the win.

    -ki