Comments : Collective Soul

  • 2 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Wow! This is amazing and the last two lines genius! What a beautiful thought.
    I'm adding it to my favourites and I hope it picks up a nomination! :-)
    =^.^=

  • 2 months ago

    by ddavidd

    Such maturity and soulfulness in your pen!! Your paintbrush brings still life to animation.

  • 2 months ago

    by S s...

    With last two lines you have put soul into this poem.
    Beautiful!

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautifully written.

  • 2 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Excellent work and clever word play creating a moving piece of writing. Thank you for sharing.

    • 2 months ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you for taking the time to read.

  • 2 months ago

    by hiraeth

    a beautiful embodiment of 'sonder', well done!

    • 2 months ago

      by Risqué

      I just looked up this word. Definitely adding it to my vocabulary!

  • 2 months ago

    by Mark

    Touching the hearts of others, the interplay, unknowingly at times. This is beautifully composed all lines in the stanza relating and connecting to the initial. Glad if the front page displayed this.

    • 2 months ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
      R.