Wow! This is amazing and the last two lines genius! What a beautiful thought.
I'm adding it to my favourites and I hope it picks up a nomination! :-)
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Such maturity and soulfulness in your pen!! Your paintbrush brings still life to animation.

With last two lines you have put soul into this poem.
Beautiful!

Beautifully written.

Excellent work and clever word play creating a moving piece of writing. Thank you for sharing.

a beautiful embodiment of 'sonder', well done!

Touching the hearts of others, the interplay, unknowingly at times. This is beautifully composed all lines in the stanza relating and connecting to the initial. Glad if the front page displayed this.