Comments : Collective Soul

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Wow! This is amazing and the last two lines genius! What a beautiful thought.
    I'm adding it to my favourites and I hope it picks up a nomination! :-)
    =^.^=

  • 1 year ago

    by ddavidd

    Such maturity and soulfulness in your pen!! Your paintbrush brings still life to animation.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ya----Na

    With last two lines you have put soul into this poem.
    Beautiful!

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautifully written.

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Excellent work and clever word play creating a moving piece of writing. Thank you for sharing.

    • 1 year ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you for taking the time to read.

  • 1 year ago

    by hiraeth

    a beautiful embodiment of 'sonder', well done!

    • 1 year ago

      by Risqué

      I just looked up this word. Definitely adding it to my vocabulary!

  • 1 year ago

    by Mark

    Touching the hearts of others, the interplay, unknowingly at times. This is beautifully composed all lines in the stanza relating and connecting to the initial. Glad if the front page displayed this.

    • 1 year ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
      R.