Comments : White Crowned Sparrows Over The Mojave

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Great write on what happened, Mark.

  • 2 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Thanks Mark for asking me to read this poem. I did not find this offensive. This is a moving topical piece that will surely resonate.

  • 2 months ago

    by Risqué

    Resonates. Well written.

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Agree with Mr Darcy a moving topical piece. Sometimes you have to capture such moments so they are never forgotten. Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Mark - bloody happy you posted this and its nominated!!!
    It will do well to make the front page i think. It deserves it. its full of sadness and vivid descriptions.. Well done on writing such an amzing piece - as sad as it is. and the events in it are such a raw topic.

  • 2 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    So sad but beautifully penned Mark. x
    =^.^=

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    This is extremely beautiful yet so sad and one that packs a real hard punch in the gut with fantastic imagery as ever

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Mark,
    Another wonderful piece of writing from you, a sad flow theme, but great to read
    Well done fella
    Michael :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Hellon

    What a very sad piece...it's the first I've read since this horrible event took place. I like how you have managed to keep the tone of the poem somber throughout, it works so well with your word choice.

    Sadly, I don't think it will be the last atrocity unless the gun laws are changed.

  • 2 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Such a sad piece and you did a wonderful job. Where is this world going with these evil people living in. All the very best.