Comments : Consume Me

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Raw and bloody you can feel the anger

  • 2 weeks ago

    by C J T

    The second verse had so much emotion within itself.. Very relatable. I enjoyed reading this due to the rhythmatic flow. Great write indeed.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Em

    Holy moly this hits something deep and raw inside of me that screams "let me out" those last two lines though are the making of this piece don't let anybody grind you down

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ooh OUCH! This is dark but brilliant. You've depicted the raw pain perfectly! :-)
    =^.^=

  • 2 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ha! That's the way you go...hehe. I love this. I felt the pain with your great imagery and the ending hits hard.