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I absolutly adored reading this. The words literally flowed off the toungue so freely. This is a great write
, simply written but with great meaning. Great work (:
by Mihir Deshmukh
by Milly Hayward
What an imaginative and compelling piece. The rhyming and flow are excellent and the way you raise curiosity in the reader to find out who is this not and why is he waiting?..
The opening stanza is compelling and beautifully written " in a town where no one goes, in a yard where nothing grows. He sits amongst his woes - i see a boy.
In those four opening lines you instantly attract the attention of the reader and set a vivid tone.
Loved it. Milly x
by Kitty Cat Lady
Ooh twisty! Really unique and full of mystery ... I'm left wanting to know the full story. Brilliant! :-)
Wow, this is amazing! I love the story line and your rhyming through-out. Flows beautifully!