Comments : When Water Freezes, Hearts Will Melt

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ben, I love this mystical riddle and really love your rhyming structure ... beautiful words as ever. A treat to read! x
    =^.^=

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Thank you, Kitty

  • 1 month ago

    by Jamie

    Ben, The wording and imagery are a perfect mixture here. You did well to say what you wanted to say. Great metaphors. :)

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    Love this Ben I wasn't sure if your work could get any better but with each post it seems to

    • 1 month ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Em, I wish that that were so but thank you.

  • 1 month ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hi Ben, this sounds like a heart calling out to a loved one now gone from this world. In another world, a better one, this other heart will hear these words and know the truth you speak.

  • 1 month ago

    by Michael

    Ben,
    Your love for the sun battles on and again in this wonderful piece. I can feel a yearning cry!
    Nice rhyming poem

    Michael :)

    • 1 month ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks for your time as ever, Michael

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Dang Ben, this is amazeballs! Every piece you write just keeps on swinging for the fences. I really need to know how your brain works-it's crazy good!

    • 1 month ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Brenda, but you don't want to know how my brain works, lol

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is a melting write, Ben. It melted my heart because this is a sad piece but with a heart-warming end. Beautifully rhymed too.

    • 1 month ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Mel. I hope you took what I thought you might from it.

  • 1 month ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Another excellent piece. Great rhyming and as always superb imagery and emotion. Glad to see it has been nominated. Milly x

  • 1 month ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Great work Ben, with my Faith I staunchly believe that true love lives on even after death as our Souls and Spirit's are immortal. Your poem plays this out beautifully, a typical Ben work indeed!