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by Kitty Cat Lady
Ben, I love this mystical riddle and really love your rhyming structure ... beautiful words as ever. A treat to read! x
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Kitty
Ben, The wording and imagery are a perfect mixture here. You did well to say what you wanted to say. Great metaphors. :)
Love this Ben I wasn't sure if your work could get any better but with each post it seems to
Em, I wish that that were so but thank you.
by - Mr. Darcy
Hi Ben, this sounds like a heart calling out to a loved one now gone from this world. In another world, a better one, this other heart will hear these words and know the truth you speak.
Thank you, Michael
Your love for the sun battles on and again in this wonderful piece. I can feel a yearning cry!
Nice rhyming poem
Thanks for your time as ever, Michael
Dang Ben, this is amazeballs! Every piece you write just keeps on swinging for the fences. I really need to know how your brain works-it's crazy good!
Thank you, Brenda, but you don't want to know how my brain works, lol
This is a melting write, Ben. It melted my heart because this is a sad piece but with a heart-warming end. Beautifully rhymed too.
Thank you, Mel. I hope you took what I thought you might from it.
by Milly Hayward
Another excellent piece. Great rhyming and as always superb imagery and emotion. Glad to see it has been nominated. Milly x
Thank you, Milly.
by CRAFTY KEN
Great work Ben, with my Faith I staunchly believe that true love lives on even after death as our Souls and Spirit's are immortal. Your poem plays this out beautifully, a typical Ben work indeed!
Thank you, Ken.