Comments : Cracking Womb

  • 1 month ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I love how that sounds - "womb of my stillness" - the depth from that is incredible.
    Really interesting write! The wording was unique and there is a lot woven between the lines. This memory, this picture of this person, is with you and gives you sustenance it seems.

    • 1 month ago

      by Ramon G Haupt

      yes i have a small writers block, so currently it is a bit hard to try and bring the message, but I'm glad you like it though :)

  • 1 month ago

    by ddavidd

    There are so much maturity to your voice and subject. Reading you is like clicking voice in your brain: That's it, it is the way it should be written.
    Glad you are here my friend.

    • 1 month ago

      by Ramon G Haupt

      thank you kind friend, I am glad you are happy with my work, your poetry is great as well, we should motivate each other to bring out the great art of poetry