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by Ya----Na Oct 9, 2017
Dark, fantasy /
I was given birth by
to parallel the structure of this universe,
I stole something very precious from him
and locked it in my heart forever.
Well, I haven't seen his presence since I came into existence.
I force them to
of an endless loop
where they have to live, die and reborn everyday
to repeat the same thing time and time again
until I eat their soul.
Some adore me as their
for making them immortal;
once I fill their hearts with my
they happily suffer everything -
from cuts to bruises to abuses and fear no pain.
Tell me, has anyone of you ever seen me?
Only I know the tale
which is I am nothing, but just an experience.
And I won't come out easily unless someone triggers me.
Ben!Note: wrote this one for Ben's darkness contest.
This piece is wonderfully crafted and shows us so much of your unique and compelling writing. Great write.
by Milly Hayward
Thought provoking, clever piece with much depth. Liked the acrobatic elements woven through out. Glad it's been nominated. Milly x
by Kitty Cat Lady
A dark and twisty tale of the dark side of religion Shane ... love it! Thought provoking and uniquely structured. Well done x
Free Verse this is a unique piece and take on darkness. The inner acrostics are an integral part of this well written poem.
'I am nothing, but just an experience'.
Free Verse, I loved this on Ben's contest and I love it now-well done-