I've been sitting

by Jamparnell   Oct 11, 2017

I've been sitting.
Oh, have I been sitting.
Lengthened legs be withering away...
Sullenly a sway in the wind.
I barely have a say where I go.
I move like the snow on a mountain.
Sitting collecting momentum until I fall all at once, once more...
I've been sitting.
Once I had a vision to be ridden of this mission.
No revision.
No new words.
A promise no one ever heard.
I've been sitting.


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  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    I enjoyed reading this. I like the title and there is a playfulness in the way you presented it...I almost kind of read like a rap due to the pauses in here. I have been reading your other poems too and I notice your very unique rhyme scene which gives a different voice to your writes. Lovely!

    • 5 months ago

      by Jamparnell

      Thank you. I enjoy writing poetry but sometimes feedback is really nice. Thanks for reading.