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by Kasie Oct 11, 2017
Special events /
A cork pops, giving a surprising scare,
As champagne spews high into the night air.
Ev'ryone looks and cheers with joyful glee,
While sipping their drinks and laughing carefree.
The music is blaring into the crowd,
Sending rhythmic vibrations through the ground.
Ev'ryone is moving to the songs beat,
Dancing and singing in the crowded street.
The party keeps going, while fireworks crack,
Ev'ryone's in awe, as the sparks trail back.
Another wave of lights, flicker up high,
While ev'ryone stares into the night sky.
The glistening Sparks seem to fade away,
As the clock strikes twelve, calling a new day;
A new day for fun with new dreams as well,
And a few good friends with stories to tell.
The night will remain inside of their minds,
As they leave the party and friend's behind.
The party is over for now, my friends,
For the night is done and the sun ascends.
Kasie, a wonderful celebration write-what a party you gave! So well done-
Beautiful celebratory piece with fabulous rhyming
Thank you, Em.
by S s...
These days most of my time spend in parties and this is what happens to me everyday.
You have captured the theme of celebration or parties very well.
A piece that resonates with myself and very well told in your piece.
An enjoyable read
Thank you, Michael :)
by Kitty Cat Lady
Sounds like a great party Kaise! You've captured the feeling so well in this lovely rhyming piece :-) x
by Ben Pickard