Comments : Grain of Sand.

  • 1 year ago

    by gumshuda

    oh you've done an extremely well here to portray what you thought. you caught what I was thinking perfectly, I just wasn't able to portray it so well. I really love this. nominated.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ya----Na

    Such poems don't need any category, they only need admiration of other poets.
    Cjt, you are a pearl and so are your poems.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Wow

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    You said this was inspired by Purvi's poem...yeah, you have even detailed the feeling of being a grain of sand...beautifully done. I'm glad that this is nominated!

  • 1 year ago

    by Wuggleberry

    This is really good. So much meaning in it :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Karen Montegrande

    nicely done..i like this one, maybe we can make it a song

  • 9 months ago

    by Bless_Poet

    Amazing . Felt as though it was speaking to me