Comments : Conversation

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Oh goodness, this is sad. So much longing for once what was and so much sadness in how the demise of this relationship went. Beautifully written, visuals are spot on-well done-

  • 1 month ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Sad poem but relatable

  • 1 month ago

    by Mark

    Wonderfully descriptive u requited love poem. This is beautiful:

    I am busy in drinking my heart
    to
    forget the fear of drowning in your
    lies again

    your memories always come along with winds of the past
    and turn into ashes the remains of my soul.

    Wonderful

  • 1 month ago

    by S s...

    Thanks, Brenda, Paul and Mark...

  • 3 weeks ago

    by C Cattaway

    "your memories always come along with winds of the past
    and turn into ashes the remains of my soul"

    Beautifully worded. So sad, but with eyes wide open. Well done.

    Catherine x