Comments : My Forever

  • 1 year ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    Brenda,
    This is adorable.
    I loved everything about this.
    Too cute (:

    • 1 year ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much. My life really changed after I met him.

  • 1 year ago

    by ddavidd

    There are no more theme that has been used to exhaustion like this one, yet every time one utters it with heart it generates the same genuine feeling such as now. I guess heart does not have a theme; it is always afresh.

    • 1 year ago

      by Brenda

      Frank, thank you so much. He truly makes my heart sing and so very happy. He is my everything and as corny as it sounds-I just want to yell it from the rooftops.

    • 1 year ago

      by ddavidd

      I assure you Brenda: You're never corny!!

  • 1 year ago

    by Mark

    Brenda what a beautiful love poem

    • 1 year ago

      by Brenda

      Awww thanks Mark. He makes loving oh so easy-

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw Brenda! Magical ... I bet this made him swoon a bit ;-) I'm so happy that you have this x
    =^.^=

    • 1 year ago

      by Brenda

      Miss Kitty, thank you so much. Yes, he did love this.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Brenda,

    You have been a busy lady and I have to say, long may it continue whilst you're turning out lovely little gems like this. A simply beautiful write.

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

    • 1 year ago

      by Brenda

      Awww, thank you Ben.My awesome hunny bunny makes it so easy.

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Wow Brenda - stuning.. :) well done.. you have been busy lately as Benny said and i agree you have come out with some fantastic pieces!

    • 1 year ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Nams! I truly appreciate you. Hugs my friend!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ya----Na

    There isn't anything pure like true love.
    It's good to see a poem full of love where most of us writing about our dark experiences...

    • 1 year ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much. I have my share of darker writes. With my husband he really makes it easy.

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Miss Brenda,
    Just beautiful..
    A wonderful happy and nice to read about your love and care for your hubby,
    almost shed a tear, oh you! :) Gets me weeping a nomination
    Much happiness
    Michael :)x

    • 1 year ago

      by Brenda

      Awww thank you Michael! I really appreciate you. We like to send each other "love texts" during the day. He truly is my everything-hugs!

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    This had me smiling all along just beautiful B

    Em x

    • 1 year ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Em. Hugs!

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A lovely piece. I'm a sucker for romance and this has it nailed. Milly x

    • 1 year ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Milly! I appreciate you-hugs my friend.

  • 1 year ago

    by Gwenyth Hill

    So beautiful.. fantastic poem!

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Queen Brenda congratulations on your win!!!

    • 1 year ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Congratulations, Brenda - couldn't be happier for you!

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Ben and Lady Mel, thank you so much! Totally geeked!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ya----Na

    Congratulations Brenda.
    I am so happy.

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Hey Lady Brenda :)
    How wonderful you are on the front page, I so pleased for you. I loved this piece

    Much love
    Michael x :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Congratulations lovely lady, so glad to see this win :-) x=^.^=

  • 1 year ago

    by Mark

    Congratulations Brenda! Great win

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats Brenda

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Nams, Mark, Kitty, Michael and Shane-thank you all so much! I truly appreciate everyone's well wishes and your continued support for my poems. Hugs to you all!

  • 1 year ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    This poem speaks of a deep bond that I could only dream of, in a format that has become familiar to me as from your pen. It is well-worded, like a sensible and beautiful thought-stream, short and succinct but nonetheless powerful for it. I also like how well the line "completing my circle of life" could be an allegory for a wedding ring, whether intended or not.

    Congratulations on a the front page win, it is well-deserved, as is each morsel of happiness brought to you through love and life. You are indeed a great individual.

    Much love,
    S

    • 1 year ago

      by Brenda

      Stephen, thank you so much! I will always hold that hope you find your special someone. It's been a journey, that's for sure but I am finally on the right path. Hugs my friend -