Comments : I don’t need it anymore

  • 1 month ago

    by Mark

    What I like here is the change in mood from the pain to this line..
    "I find peace in simple things like sunsets or the warm breeze"
    Lovely poem, you took me on that emotional roller coaster!

    • 1 month ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Thanks mark. It was an emotional rollarcoaster for me myself, but I’m getting off.

  • 1 month ago

    by S s...

    Bt, I loved the way you started with a sad tune but end on positive thinking.
    That you are strong now, you have learned how to fight his absence and how to shed his skin and make yourself whole once again.

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    BT, I hope someone nominates this (I am out) as it truly is an inspirational piece of writing and a fine lesson to anyone who feels low: things do get better, we just have to keep keeping on and the sun will shine again.

    All the very best,

    Ben

    • 1 month ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Thank you Ben! I find that some of my best pieces happen to be about myself, and the struggle of finding and loving me. But I’m getting there!

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Love This! It's all about walking away, becoming stronger and finally being able to live again. Well done -

  • 1 month ago

    by Michael

    BT

    Your writing always comes across with a flow of openness, emotion and honesty
    an this one is no exception
    Well done
    Much love
    Michael :)

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Clichés are always clichés for a reason ... and 'time is a healer' is so true here ... this is a lovely poem that depicts that awful process really well :-)
    =^.^=

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    Aww, such a raw and strong write, BT. Fighting!