by C Cattaway Oct 18, 2017
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You gave me a flower. |
Loved the rhyming and the tale of woe. I don't normally like repetitive line starts but keeping the lines short and punch really works. Milly x |
by BlueJay
This reminds me of the Gravenhurst song "Black Holes in the Sand". If you have not heard of it I highly recommend! (It's even fun to listen to while reading this piece, they actually go kinda well together.) It's a cool little write and I can't wait to see what else you can come up with and how the skills you show here will evolve and strengthen. |
by C Cattaway
Thankyou. I shall seek out the song x |