Comments : I wish to vaporise

  • 4 weeks ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Wow.

    I nominated this right away, and then went to read it a second time. This piece is powerful, that strong desire to be something so much greater than ourselves is poignant and potent; to touch lives all around the world, to leave our mark and be remembered for the great things we have done. That understanding that it isn't always the outrageously large structures that we remember, but the flowers, the stars (which to us, are small), each water molecule, the small interactions that make our lives better ... your meaning was purveyed wonderfully.

    Brilliant write.
    IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 4 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautiful, Purvi.

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Em

    Just wow sorry words have failed me

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Purvi,

    Such a beautiful piece with wonderful imagery throughout, I m pleased this has been nominated. I just love the final verse, jut a great end to this
    Michael :)

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Mayday

    WOW. @_@ That was mesmerizing. Purvi, this is SO cool - not to mention impressive! You're an excellent poet - never stop writing ^_^

    10/5 <3