The message in this is very direct and precise and I know exactly how you feel and all i can do is click the like button.
On the other hand the rhythm was on key and didn't flaw so good job on that.
All in all this is an excellent poem.
If you ever need to talk im here for you.
Keep in mind you're never alone and i wish you the best in life.
Mahalia, this is heartfelt and wrenching and no, I don't know what that's like ... not all at once anyway :-(
What I do know though is that being so in touch with how you feel and being able to express it so brilliantly will give you strength down the line. You already have more presence of mind than those making you feel 'less than'.
The poem itself flows really well with lovely rhyming. Really well done x
Invisible and mute to the world! A voice caged but not
heard or given an opportunity to be heard. Worst still been
labeled and not given the chance to be heard rather, a misunderstood
soul silently screaming to be seen, felt, touched and acknowledged.
Its not just a touching poem but a painful one for someone to