Comments : just you

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Awww Em, this is so sweet! It's love in its purest form. Just beautiful.

  • 2 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Really lovely Em. I'm so happy you have this :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 2 months ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I feel this piece would be better if the line "it completes me" were with the couplet above it (making it a triplet) and "you complete me" were on its own to just linger in the reader's mind. Just my opinion though!

    A powerful little romantic piece, and I really like the part about your smile.

    Love it!
    S

  • 2 months ago

    by Mark

    I do adore your love poems!

    • 2 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks all
      And S you're right about that thank you edit made

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Sweet, Em. Touching piece.

  • 2 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Em - this is beautiful. I feel the love.

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Wow! Em

    So heart-warming, with romance resting upon a chest
    Love this lady
    Much love
    Michael x :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Einstein

    It's good to see you smile once again.
    Like Mark I am a fan of your love poems too.
    Keep on writing them too.

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A lovely peaceful heartwarming piece of love. I think some of your best pieces are about love. Great piece Em. Milly x