Comments : Sentimental value

  • 8 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Michael,
    What a sad piece about loss of love. I do like the lay out and the viauals are spot on.

    Well done

    • 8 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks nams :)x

  • 8 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Michael,
    I became so sentimental after reading this. I really hate you for hurting me every single time with your heartbreaking pieces. :-)

    Ahh, you are so good at it, really. Added to my faves.

    • 8 months ago

      by Michael

      That's an ironic compliment Miss Mel
      thank you ;0x

  • 8 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ah Michael, such a cleverly woven poem.

    "My heart-

    oscillating to the
    rhythm of your
    mood swings"

    This is genius, although to be honest, I could have picked any line here. The last stanza is also perfect! Such an intricate tale of a heart misused. Added to faves x
    =^.^=

    • 8 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty,
      for your lovely comments as always :)x

  • 8 months ago

    by Mark

    Just beautiful Michael. Great metaphors! I'm with Kitty, one could pick any line, great poetry

    • 8 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Mark :)

  • 8 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Well deserved nomination. You are really brilliant at producing mesmerising metaphors that grip the imagination. An excellent piece. Milly x

    • 8 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly
      Lovely words as always :)x

  • 8 months ago

    by Mark

    Michael Congratulations! :')

    • 8 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 8 months ago

    by Scott Cole

    Congratulations on ur win!!!!!

    • 8 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Scott and you too fella :)

  • 8 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congratulations on your win, Michael!!!

    • 8 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel :)

  • 8 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Well done Michael, congratulations :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 8 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K x :)

  • 8 months ago

    by (we & why)

    Congratulations Michael

  • 8 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win Michael

    • 8 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Dagmar x

  • 8 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win!!

  • 8 months ago

    by Maher

    Congrats on the win Michael. My favourite part was this:

    My heart -
    oscillating to the
    rhythm of your
    mood swings.

    I envy you sir. I wish the ones I dealt with had a rhythm :|

    • 8 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Maher for lovely compliments...
      and I'm sure you do!

  • 8 months ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    A worthy win, Michael.

    Great write!

    The only thing that threw me off was "losing", it feels like it should be "lose".

    IdTakeABulletForYou

    • 8 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you :)
      and yes I would agree with you, after reading again

  • 8 months ago

    by Em

    JUDGING COMMENTS:
    Sentimental value by Michael points 7
    This is probably going to be the shortest comment I've ever written but this piece was extremely moving and one which we could probably all relate to in some aspect. The rawness of the piece seemed to ooze off the tongue so much so that it hit me like a tonne of bricks. The words and styling (actually I cannot fault any of this) were just perfect in my opinion.

  • 7 months ago

    by Emily Wacker

    Congratulations on the win! Well-deserved!
    -Emily

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Emily :)x