Comments : Sentimental value

  • 4 weeks ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Michael,
    What a sad piece about loss of love. I do like the lay out and the viauals are spot on.

    Well done

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thanks nams :)x

  • 4 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Michael,
    I became so sentimental after reading this. I really hate you for hurting me every single time with your heartbreaking pieces. :-)

    Ahh, you are so good at it, really. Added to my faves.

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Michael

      That's an ironic compliment Miss Mel
      thank you ;0x

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ah Michael, such a cleverly woven poem.

    "My heart-

    oscillating to the
    rhythm of your
    mood swings"

    This is genius, although to be honest, I could have picked any line here. The last stanza is also perfect! Such an intricate tale of a heart misused. Added to faves x
    =^.^=

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty,
      for your lovely comments as always :)x

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Mark

    Just beautiful Michael. Great metaphors! I'm with Kitty, one could pick any line, great poetry

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Well deserved nomination. You are really brilliant at producing mesmerising metaphors that grip the imagination. An excellent piece. Milly x

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly
      Lovely words as always :)x

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Mark

    Michael Congratulations! :')

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Scott Cole

    Congratulations on ur win!!!!!

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Scott and you too fella :)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congratulations on your win, Michael!!!

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel :)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Well done Michael, congratulations :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K x :)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by S s...

    Congratulations Michael

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win Michael

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Dagmar x

  • 3 weeks ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win!!

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Maher

    Congrats on the win Michael. My favourite part was this:

    My heart -
    oscillating to the
    rhythm of your
    mood swings.

    I envy you sir. I wish the ones I dealt with had a rhythm :|

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Maher for lovely compliments...
      and I'm sure you do!

  • 3 weeks ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    A worthy win, Michael.

    Great write!

    The only thing that threw me off was "losing", it feels like it should be "lose".

    IdTakeABulletForYou

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you :)
      and yes I would agree with you, after reading again

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Em

    JUDGING COMMENTS:
    Sentimental value by Michael points 7
    This is probably going to be the shortest comment I've ever written but this piece was extremely moving and one which we could probably all relate to in some aspect. The rawness of the piece seemed to ooze off the tongue so much so that it hit me like a tonne of bricks. The words and styling (actually I cannot fault any of this) were just perfect in my opinion.